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Write about anything you’d like. Somewhere in your post, include the sentence, “I heard the car door slam, and immediately looked at the clock.”
It was a Tuesday afternoon.
I was worried sick by this stage, and phoning her was not an option no cell phone coverage where I live.
The news was still blaring on the TV, of the earthquake in the city center.
The visuals were disturbing, cathedral crashing to the ground, people running out of the building, crying, sobbing. This was like a movie..
Oh god I wish it was a movie, but its real! Rocking my self back and forth, its real, its real. Oh god where was she? I’m praying so loud I’m sure god and his whole entourage will hear me!!
I heard the car door slam, and immediately looked at the clock.
3.33
They heard me!
She is home safe. shaken, stirred but very much safe, and alive!
Wow. That was pretty intense for a short read.
intense was the goal, I read it back you can feel the speed of my writing so plenty of errors lol
I really didn’t notice any errors.
It just felt a bit repetitive to me, but I read it in a rush as well
It felt like it should be read in a rush with a sense of panic that makes the repetitiveness very appropriate and unnoticeable.
I tweaked a bit
Well I hope the entire congregation is fine.
185 people lost their lives
Nothing I can do from here. Simply hope for the best fro those grieving families and friends and move on to do it again.
Exactly we all hold the families in love