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clock is ticking
heart is beating
unclear as to where the tick lies
computer hums
minds buzzed
jagged nothing floats with something
like a moat around my soul
guarding from danger
that could come to rape
me of my innocence
I was born innocent
but it became stale
like bread turned blue at the edges
frayed like cotton threads
holding something together
what was it again?
lies
innocence
“Jagged nothing floats with something” is an amazing line.
I did change it I had fluffy nothing LOL I thought jagged fitted better, thanks Charles
Jagged definitely fits better. It has a much more solid impact.
Yep, fluffy doesn’t cut it lol